You nailed the voice. The story fits this image perfectly. I like how you kept coming back to the parts the family didn't include. You had a compete story: suspense, an arc and a happy ending. I like how you used light and glow at the end. This is well done. I enjoyed reading it. Very clever. Good luck!
Haha! Love the title and the pumpkin's voice.
Very funny! I love the sad little pumpkin that inspired it too.
Really enjoyed this! Love the pumpkins "voice"!
Really cute use of the picture prompt!
What fun!!! Very creative. I laughed out loud at "But my family didn’t give me arms." Unexpected and too perfect.
Nice job using the pumpkin's perspective!
Love, love, love this story! You’ve captured the pumpkins perspective perfectly! Thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
You nailed the voice. The story fits this image perfectly. I like how you kept coming back to the parts the family didn't include. You had a compete story: suspense, an arc and a happy ending. I like how you used light and glow at the end. This is well done. I enjoyed reading it. Very clever. Good luck!
Love this! So cute and clever!
So cute, Melissa! Great job!
Haha! Cute perspective. Everything is better on a stick. Good luck with the contest. :)
Ahh, such a satisfying ending!
Even the smallest of lights can shine brightly in the night. Good job little pumpkin!
That's adorable, I love the frustration about not having arms or the ability to move their head.